A spot for the Fashion Design, the Graphic Design, the Industrial Design and the Photography students to share their ideas, thoughts, and projects with one another, as they work collaboratively on the Sustaining San Francisco project. Let's start blogging!
Comments: Music: wonderful. creates the mood, romantic, lively and fun. puts a smile on one's face
.21 Love the handling of the tomatoes / first guy to use the iphone is punching it. Good vendor example, but bad user interface example. (which is what your product is about)
1:02 Great example of vendor counting what she has, could shorten her involvement.
1:13: Guy selling eggs generically shows how one would use the iphone ap in the most correct manner so far...
1:20 Love the transition from soft and sweet tunes to scratchy reality.
1:23 You need a new apartment/end user. This is not your demographic/target market. Think of this as a marketing video...
1:53 30 seconds have now been spent in the home environment. Again, think about the hierarchy of information... you lose me here.
More soon.. your video cuts off here (out here in the country. Satellite connection speed :)
forgot to say... at the very beginning. .17 My favorite part of the video is when you see the legs (briefly) of a human being behind the "legs" of the tent(?)/opening/dancing. super, super, sweet.
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ReplyDeleteMusic: wonderful. creates the mood, romantic, lively and fun. puts a smile on one's face
.21 Love the handling of the tomatoes / first guy to use the iphone is punching it. Good vendor example, but bad user interface example. (which is what your product is about)
1:02 Great example of vendor counting what she has, could shorten her involvement.
1:13: Guy selling eggs generically shows how one would use the iphone ap in the most correct manner so far...
1:20 Love the transition from soft and sweet tunes to scratchy reality.
1:23 You need a new apartment/end user. This is not your demographic/target market. Think of this as a marketing video...
1:53 30 seconds have now been spent in the home environment. Again, think about the hierarchy of information... you lose me here.
More soon.. your video cuts off here (out here in the country. Satellite connection speed :)
forgot to say... at the very beginning.
ReplyDelete.17 My favorite part of the video is when you see the legs (briefly) of a human being behind the "legs" of the tent(?)/opening/dancing. super, super, sweet.